Tuesday, February 20, 2018

Story: The Two Travelers


Two friends, Gabe and Sam, were journeying together, when they came to a broad stream at the foot of a hill. The shade from the woods was so welcoming after traveling in such a small car all day and they decided to rest.

They started a fire to cook some of the food they had killed while hunting in the woods. After eating, they pitched a tent and slept. Arising from their sleep they happened upon a hologram that was projecting this message: Travelers, we have prepared an excellent banquet for your refreshment, but you must be bold and deserve it before you can obtain it.  What you are to do is this: throw yourselves bravely into the stream and swim to the other side. You will find there a lion carved from marble. This statue you must lift upon your shoulders and, with one run, carry to the top of yonder mountain, never heading the thorns which prick your feet nor the wild beasts that may be lurking in the bushes to devour you. When once you have gained the top of the mountain you will find yourselves in possession of great happiness.

Gabe was ecstatic when he read these words. “See, Sam,” he cried, “here lies the road to our happiness. We should start at once and see if what the hologram says is true.”

Sam, however, was very doubtful. “Perhaps,” he answered, “this hologram is but a joke of some kid wanting to video us. Perhaps the current of the stream runs too swiftly for any man to swim it. And why would I want to swim through when my iPhone is not waterproof. I for one will have no part in it.”

Nevertheless, Gabe was not discouraged, not telling Sam that his phone was a Samsung Galaxy S7 and is waterproof. “I am always looking for a challenge,” he replied, “and if you will not go with me, I must go alone. So the two friends embraced, and Sam left in his self-driving car that had been charging all morning from the sun.

Gabe dove into the stream and soon found himself in the midst of a whirlpool. He bravely kept swimming and finally reached the other side.

After resting a few moments on the beach, he lifted the marble lion with one mighty effort, and with one run reached the top of the mountain. Here he saw to his great surprise that he was standing before the gates of a beautiful city. He could see skyscrapers and cars hovering from one building to the next.

Stuck in a gaze at the magnificent, he saw all the cars stop what they were doing and start zooming towards the gate. The whistles of the hover cars echoed through the mountain side and the cars stopped before the gate.

All of the people poured out of the city gates with great smiles. A group of young men came up and knelt before him, saying, “Brave stranger, we beseech thee to put on this super suit which we are bringing, and, mounted upon this hover car, ride back with thy subjects to the city.”

Gabe, who could not believe his ears, begged them to explain how he could be the king of such an advanced society that he has no knowledge of. The men replied, “Whenever our king dies, we place upon the hologram by the river the message which you have read. Then we wait patiently until a traveler passes by who is brave enough to undertake the bold venture. We have been during this for thousands of years and no king has yet to fail us because only a man who is fearless of heart and dauntless of purpose would take on this challenge.”

A View from his Hover Car Wikimedia Commons

Author’s Note: I read The Two Travelers from the Bidpai unit. In the original story, the travelers were going by camel and needed to rest in the shade after traveling through a desert all day. They happened upon a stone in the morning with the same description. The second traveler did not want to take the journey because he thought that the journey was impossible and that nothing would be on the other side. So he left on his camel and parted ways with his lifelong friend and traveling buddy.

In my story, I kept the description of the message the same and changed how it appeared in from of them. I changed it to a hologram rather than a stone. I made everything more futuristic except for the challenge at hand. I kept that the same to show that the city has been doing this challenge for centuries on centuries. Instead the city rumbling and bumbling over to the city gate, I had them hover of in their futuristic cars. I also decided to keep the reasoning for why he should be king pretty much the same to show that the tradition has been around for centuries. This shows that even as technology advances, we still stick to our roots.

Bibliography: The Two Travelers, a story from The Tortoise and the Geese and Other Fables of Bidpai by Maude Barrows Dutton, with illustrations by E. Boyd Smith, 1908.

2 comments:

  1. Michael,
    This was a great story! The message the travelers were given seemed impossible at first, but I loved that one of the characters was so optimistic among hearing it. I love that the king is chosen by who is brave enough to attempt the adventure. I like the conflict of one character wanting to pursue the adventure and the other not wanting to. I also enjoyed your reading note about how you kept the same description but just changed how it appeared. Your story was more modern, and it worked out! Great job!

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  2. Hi Michael! This was such a great story. I had not read the original but from your author’s note it seemed like you really added a lot to the story. I liked how you set the story in the not so distant future where we will have self-driving cars. This was a great modern retelling of the original story. I also liked how you made the future king have a waterproof phone and his friend have an iphone.

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