Showing posts with label Week 7. Show all posts
Showing posts with label Week 7. Show all posts

Tuesday, February 27, 2018

Story: The Virtual World

After eating his three pills for dinner, the first containing protein and tasting like a medium rare steak, the second containing vitamins A and E and tasting like a variety of vegetables, and the third containing vitamin C tasting like a variety of fruits, he walks toward his computer and grabs his sword and attaches his helmet to his head to enter into the virtual world. Upon entering the virtual world, two robots come along holding a card saying, "Homo Sapien." They would not let him resist and led him away. And when they reached the great city, the human gradually came to himself. Over the city gate, he sees a hologram projecting in large letters the words, "The Nether World."

Then all was suddenly clear to him and he says: “Why, this must be the dwelling-place of Death! But I have long since escaped from his power, and how dare he have me dragged here!” The more he reflects on the situation the wilder he grows. He draws out his sword and swings it at everything. He crushes robots and buildings, leaving a pile of rubbish. He also uploads a computer virus into two of the robots causing them to catch fire and spin around in circles.

The ten Robots of the Dead were frightened, bow before him and asking: “Who are you?”

The human answers: “If you do not know me, then why did you send for me and drag me to this place? I am Marcus Zane, the human-born king of the real world and protector of my people. And now, who are you? Tell me your names quickly or I will strike you!”

Marcus Zane says: “I, the Venerable Son, have gained the power of eternal life! You have nothing to say to me! Quick, let me have the Book of Life!”

They do not dare defy him and have one of the robots bring in the book. The human king opens it. Under the head of “humans,” No. 1289, he reads: “Marcus Zane, the human-born king of the real world and protector of my people. His years shall be one hundred and twenty-four. Then he shall die without illness.”

Marcus Zane takes a laser from the table and burns out the whole human family from the Book of Life, throws the Book down and says: “Now we are even! From this day on I will suffer no impertinences from you!”

To keep this true, the artificial intelligence, that rules the Nether World and keeps everything in place, injects the human race with nanotechnology that goes into the blood and repairs any damage that every happens to them. The nanites are programmed to travel all over the body and make sure the human body does not age.

With that, he clears a way for himself out of the Nether World by the means of his sword, and the ten robots of the dead do not venture to stay him, but only complained of him afterward to the Lord of the Heavens.

When Marcus Zane leaves the city, he taps on the control center that is projecting from his watch and walks up in the real world.

He calls for his friends and tells them “I was dragged to Death’s castle and I caused an uproar. They gave me the Book of Life, and I struck out the mortal hour of all humans!”

And after that time, the humans no longer died because their names had been stricken out in the Nether World.

Human Consciousness Expanding with Eternal Life Wikimedia Commons

Author’s Note: In the original story, a monkey king of the mountains falls asleep with a bar on his head. He is dragged to the Nether World where he wreaks havoc with steel bar and scares the ten princes of dead. They are so scared that they bow to him and do anything he commands. He asks for the Book of Life and erases the apes from the book and then wakes up and tells his fellow baboons what he has done ensuring eternal life for all of the apes.


In my story, the monkey king is changed a human king and instead of falling asleep he enters into a virtual world created by an AI. The two worlds are related and coexist together. Similarly to the original, the king is dragged to the Nether World, but instead by princes, he is dragged by robots. The human king always wreaks havoc with a weapon, but also with technology that causes the robots to malfunction. He does the same as the monkey king and asks for the Book of Life to remove the human race from death. Humans could not just get eternal life so the AI for the virtual world had to inject some nanites into the humans to cause the humans to live forever.

Bibliography: In The Nether World from The Chinese Fairy Book, ed. by R. Wilhelm and translated by Frederick H. Martens (1921).

Reading: The Judgement of Baboon

One of the stories I read was about a tailor who claimed a mouse tore his clothing. Each character blames a character that counters them and that they dislike. For example the mouse blames the cat who blames the dog and so on and so on. When retelling this story I could change up each character and its counter part to have a whole new story. There is a lot of repetition in this story and that would be kept the same if I were to retell it with new characters. The baboon who is the judge ends up getting the worst of it by having to walk on all fours for the rest of his life.

Baboon realizing his fate Pixabay

Bibliography: The Judgement of the Baboon from South African Folk-Tales by James Honey (1910).

Monday, February 26, 2018

Reading Notes: The Nether World

In The Nether World from The Chinese Fairy Book, ed. by R. Wilhelm and translated by Frederick H. Martens (1921), the monkey king visits the land of the dead in a dream. The most important part of the story is when he strikes out the whole ape family from the book of life. It causes uproar from everyone in the Nether World. The monkey king just caused the apes to have eternal life. I could change the plot to a more futuristic timeline and have an AI transfer the consciousness of the human mind to a computer to cause them to live forever.

Transferring Consciousness Wikimedia Commons